The System's Sorcerer

This is a very well-written story. It starts slow but never breaks my immersion in the first chapters, which led me to read until C13. I'll be back later for the fluff Ezra and Oberyn bring ;) Keep up the great work, Author  (*u*)/

keep it more beautiful . nice story in begining6

The chapter one is amazing I love the way you balance humour and seriousness... I will reading i want to see more PS why were they taking off their clothes 🤣🤣🤣

Reading this story was a genuine suprise. The authors beautiful prose and detailed descriptions really allow you to almost enter into that world with Aurora. I spotted no grammar errors throughout the chapters I read. If there were any errors, they did not affect readability at all. But I think the authors greatest strength may be the characters. Aurora is an incredibly interesting and compelling protagonist, and I highly recommend you check out this story yourself and experience her journey.

I don’t usually read BL stories but this one seriously shattered my expectations. This is an incredibly well written story. I’be only read a bit of a bit I can’t wait to see where this is going.

I'm translating this novel for fun, and I wanted to share a quick note: the original author, 不包熟的西瓜 (Unripe Watermelon), has already dropped the story at chapter 265. Currently, I only have access to chapters up to 82. If anyone knows a way to access the source material for free, please let me know so that I can continue translating!

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tI felt puking when he called me lady but I hold back my reaction. It is best I won't get excited and be the "agitator" I was back then. Better be safe than sorry as they say.